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I. SO YOU WANT TO GET PUBLISHED . . .?
If you really want to be a published writer, keep this in mind: It's not
easy! Getting published requires a lot of time, patience, dedication,
courage, determination, hard work, love for your craft, thirst for learning your
craft, love of books and reading, a refusal to accept no or rejection in
general, tenacity, a very tough skin, and a refusal to give up. Just because
you or your wife just had a baby or you have kids and you've been making up
bedtime stories every night for years, doesn't necessarily mean you can sit down
and write a children's book and get it published right away. Or maybe you've
had this one children's story bouncing around in your head for a while—should
you take the time to write it down and try to sell it? Only if you're willing
to devote the rest of your life to writing even if this one book doesn't sell.
Writing for the purpose of getting published isn't a one-book endeavor. And
just because you have kids doesn't make you an automatic children's book
writer. Only hard work and long hours can do that. And even then, it may not
be enough to get you published.
So if you're willing to devote the long hours and hard work, what CAN get you
published? Well, I don't have the answer to what will work for you, but here's
what worked for me:
1.
Join a Professional Writer's
Association.
The Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI)
is the only international writing organization devoted exclusively to the craft
of writing for children. Through it you can attend workshops and conferences at
discounted prices and make contact with many successful writers, agents, and
editors in the children's field of literature. In addition, many publishers
will only accept manuscripts from published authors AND SCBWI members. At
$50.00 per year, it is the best bargain around.
The people in it are helpful, caring and
extremely informative. Currently, it costs $60 to join for a year and then it
is $50 to renew thereafter. I met ALL my editors either at an SCBWI conference
or as a result of attending one. Most successful children's authors will agree
it's one of the most helpful steps they ever took.
Depending on the sub-genre that you like to write in, you may also wish to join
other writers associations, like the
Mystery Writers
of America.
In California you may also join the
California Writer's Club to meet other writers and attend monthly local seminars and meetings.
2.
Subscribe to
Newsletters and Writing Magazines.
Writer's magazine and newsletters contain excellent articles written by
professional writers and writing instructors. They also contain the latest
information on publishers, trends and changes in the publishing markets,
announcements of awards and upcoming contests and the results of these, news
about publishers, editors, agents, and authors. One of my favorites is
ByLine Magazine because it contains short, easy-to-understand articles about
writing that can help even established authors. ByLine also holds great
monthly contests, which I highly recommend Two others that are helpful are:
·
The Writer
·
Writer's Digest
If
you join the SCBWI, you automatically get their bimonthly newsletter, The
SCBWI Bulletin. If you can't afford another newsletter, The Bulletin
is enough. The following are additional children's writers newsletters. I've
listed them in order of value to a beginner if you can only afford one or two:
·
Children's Writer, published by The Institute of Children's Literature
·
Children's Book Insider
·
Once Upon a Time
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3.
Set
Goals—Give Yourself Daily Assignments—Enter Contests.
If
your dream is to write and write well, you need to set up a regular routine—as
if you're in school. Write every day. Set up a daily schedule. Set
specific goals for yourself: Give yourself daily writing assignments, even if
it's only 20 to 30 minutes per day. Maybe one day, you write in your journal,
the next day, you do a writing exercise, and the next you write a story or an
article. While I was working fulltime at another job, I set a goal of writing
every day a minimum of 2 pages or 2 hours per day after work, whichever came
first. When I retired to write fulltime, I kept that goal. Two pages may not
sound like a lot, but I stuck with it and finished a rough draft in 2 ½ to 3
months each time I started a new novel. I've completed 7 novels so far. With
that schedule I also finished either a short story, short article, picture book,
or folktale per week when I wasn't writing a novel.
Another great way to help yourself set writing goals is to enter writing
contests. ByLine Magazine (see #2, above) has monthly contests, sometime
several each month. If you can't afford to take a writing class or there are
none near you, writing contests are the next best thing. A contest gives you a
writing assignment, a goal, and a specific deadline. The entrance fee for most
contests is only a few dollars ($3 to $20) for each submission. If you win, you
get that money back and then some. Some contests even offer a written critique
of your work if you don't win (those tend to be more expensive).
Entering contests also gets your name and work in front of people who might
someday take an interest in your career. The first year I retired to write
fulltime, I entered a minimum of one contest per month. Most of the ones I
entered were sponsored by ByLine, but I also entered the annual
California Writer's Club Conference Contest and the Mary Malloy Grant. I won
several First Place Awards and even made the finals in the Mary Malloy Grant,
which got me a personal letter of introduction from one of the judges—Alix Reid,
now Editorial Director at HarperCollins and one of my editors. It also gave me
something to put on my résumé when I still hadn't published a children's book.
Contests also offer a lonely writer that much-needed validation and confirmation
that you're on the right track and that your writing is taking on the polish
that publishers are looking for. After years of rejection letters, imagine how
I felt to receive a check and a letter notifying me I'd won First Place in
ByLine's Juvenile Short Story contest.
Contests are listed in various reference books on publishing, most of which are
available in your local public library. Or you can purchase a copy of
Children's Writer Guide to 2002 (or whatever the current year), published by
The Institute of Children's Literature.
For a list of the monthly ByLine contests, click
here.
In
addition to contests, do short writing assignments from books on the craft of
writing. Most books have writing exercises at the back of each chapter or the
back of the book.
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4.
Read Books on the Craft of
Writing.
There are many books on the craft of writing. Most are available at your public
library if you can't afford to buy them. But if possible, invest in your
favorites so you can reread them as you begin to learn your craft. Some
techniques simply may not be immediately grasped by a beginner. Set a goal to
read at least one per month (more when you're first starting).
Most books on writing contain excellent exercises that will help you hone in
your writing skills. As part of your daily or weekly assignments (see #3,
above), set a goal to complete some of the exercises at the end of each chapter
or at the end of the book.
The following are some excellent books on the
craft of writing:
·
The Art of Writing for Children,
by Connie C. Epstein
·
Writing and Publishing Books
for Children in the 1990's, by Olga
Litowinsky
·
Structuring Your Novel,
by Robert C. Meredith & John D. Fitzgerald
·
Characters Make Your Story,
by Maren Elwood (The Writer, Inc.)
·
Bird by Bird, by Anne Lamott (Bantam Books, 1995)
·
Writing From the Body,
by John Lee (St. Martin's Press)
·
On Becoming a Novelist,
by James Gardner (Harper & Row, 1983)
·
Writing With Pictures: How to
Write and Illustrate Children's Picture Books,
by Uri Shulevitz
·
Elements of Style, by Strunk & White
·
Word into Type
5.
Read and Study Current
Children's Books.
The best, most fun "homework" you'll ever do is reading books in your genre.
And if you want to be a writer you MUST read. And read and read and read. It
is the only way to learn what you will then put to practice when you write. You
can study all the best books on writing, but if you don't read to see and
analyze examples of what you've been taught in the texts, you'll never
quite grasp the techniques.
Read the classics, read the award winners, but also, make sure you read the
recently published picture books and novels. The publishing world is constantly
changing. You need to stay current. Not with trends—trends come and go. What
you need to study are the subtly changing styles in writing and what publishers
are looking for now. Set a goal each year to read all the award winners as well
as other books in you genre. I try to read at least 5 middle-grade or YA novels
per month. It may sound like a lot, but my list of "books to read" is much
longer, and I'm always falling behind.
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6.
Set Up or Join Critique Groups.
Critique groups are important for several reasons. First, being in a critique
group gives you instant feedback on your work and helps you fine tune you
manuscripts. Second, writing is a lonely career. Being in a critique group
gives you contact with other writers who understand what you're going through
and can share your ups and downs. Who else can truly understand the difference
between a "good" and "bad" rejection?
If
you're a joiner, join an existing critique group. If you can't find one and
you're like me, and you like to have some control over the type of group you
join, start your own. Over the years I've started three critique groups. But
each time, I tried to make sure that the others in my group were either
published or more accomplished than myself. I've found that the best size for a
"working" critique group is 3 or 4. More takes up too much time and less only
gives you one point of view.
I
avoid critique groups in which you read you manuscript aloud each session. I
prefer that each member be given a copy of the other members manuscripts, take
them home, study them, and provide some written as well as a verbal critique
during the next meeting. That way, the other members can comment on each issue
and either agree or disagree. There are several advantages to this approach.
When you read a manuscript aloud, people's minds wander and you don't get a
well-analyzed, well-thought-out critique. On the other hand, when you read
someone else's manuscript alone and take time to study and analyze it, you
learn a great deal about the writing process. It helps you learn to analyze
and edit your own manuscripts.
7.
Be Prepared to Spend Some Money.
If
you're just learning to write or if you don't have a degree in English or didn't
study creative writing in college, you need to be prepared to spend some money
to learn your craft. Classes, books, professional critiques cost money. But if
you win a few contests, apply for grants, and try to get some articles or
stories published you can offset the cost and learn your craft at the same
time. You can also minimize your costs by checking out books at the library,
haunting used bookstores, or using online resources through the Internet. Maybe
you have a skill that you can trade with a professional author for a free
critique (see #12, below).
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8.
Take Classes
or Intensive Live or Online Workshops.
The SCBWI Bulletin lists classes, one- or two-week intensive workshops,
writing retreats, or one-day seminars that are sponsored or approved by the
SCBWI. Also many colleges, community colleges, and universities hold classes on
children's book writing or children's literature. Often a local author will
hold classes at a local college. There are also various online workshops on the
Internet (some are announced by your local chapter of the SCBWI or in the
Bulletin). I was writing children's books for seven years, while also
holding a fulltime job, but I felt like I was spinning my wheels because I
couldn't find a local children's book writing class. I had so many questions
that even books couldn't answer. Finally, Mills College in Oakland, CA, sent me
an announcement of a one-week intensive workshop taught by two published and
well-known children's book authors. At the time I had recently retired, so I
could afford the time, but could barely afford the $500 it cost. Still, I
applied and it was the best money I ever spent. Most of my questions were
answered. I got feedback and critiques from the pros, and I met other writers
(two of those became my 3-person critiques group). I also worked out a
one-on-one mentorship program with each of the two instructors (see #11,
below).
If
you can afford it,
The Children's Literature Institute
offers a correspondence course in children's writing. It's very expensive, but
I've heard the classes are excellent. I've never taken their classes. I
decided instead to try to teach myself by doing what I've set forth in these
steps (reading on my own, taking the classes and workshops that became available
to me locally, and taking one-on-one mentorship programs).
Another well-respected intensive one-week workshop is the annual summer workshop
at Chautauqua, New York, sponsored by the Highlights Foundation, Inc. (the
publishers of Highlights Magazine). For information on upcoming
workshops, call (570) 253-1192 or e-mail
contact@)highlightsfoundation.org and ask for a workshop information kit.
The Highlights
Foundation also holds a series of children's writer's workshops at various time
of the year. For registration information, contact Maggie Ewain at (570)
253-1192 or e-mail her at
maewain@)highlightsfoundation.org.
The Children's Book
Insider sponsors several weekend-long fiction writing workshops at different
locations, led by Laura Backes, Publisher of Children's Book Insider, and
children's book author Linda Arms White. For information on times and
locations, click
here.
A FREE online
children's writer workshop is available on the
Barnes and Noble web site. Just click on the "Online Courses" button on the
horizontal bar near the top of the home page, then click on "Browse All
Courses." Next click on the "Writing for Children" link under Literature and
Language, and register. The course was designed by children's author Tracy Dils.
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9.
Attend Seminars & Conferences.
If
you join the SCBWI (see #1, above), you will be informed of the dates and
locations of all SCBWI seminars and conferences. The National SCBWI Annual
Summer Conference is always held in Los Angeles, CA, and usually takes place in
the beginning of August for four days. The Annual Winter Conference is held in
New York in February. The SCBWI Bulletin lists the smaller one- or
two-day conferences and seminars that are sponsored by local SCBWI chapters. At
these conferences and seminars you will learn more about your craft from
experienced, published writers and instructors, you will meet and hear from
editors, learn about current trends and publisher needs, you will establish
excellent contacts, and meet new friends. As I mentions above, I met ALL my
editors either at an SCBWI conference or as a result of attending one.
10.
Get a Good Guide to
the Publishing Market.
I
know of two excellent guides to the publishing market. The first is the
Children's Writer's & Illustrator's Market,
published by Writer's Digest Books. In it, you will find wonderful tips and
hints on how to get started writing for children, as well as the most
comprehensive listing of publishers of children's literature currently
available. It also lists agents, contests, awards, conferences and workshops.
Finally, it tells you how and where to submit your work.
The second is the Children's Writer Guide to 2002 (or whatever the
current year), published by
The Institute of Children's Literature.
This guide has a different focus and purpose. It does not list publishers and
their addresses. It is more of a working writer's tool kit, containing articles
on trends in publishing for that particular year, profile of influential
editors, and news items from children's publisher over the past year. There is
a section with articles on writing style and technique, a section on
submissions, and another on the business and career of writing. It also
contains sections with articles on idea generation and reference and research.
Finally, it also lists information and addresses of writing conferences and
contests and awards.
You can also obtain a free, current listing of children's book publishers,
magazine markets, and agents from the SCBWI.
11.
Do
a Mentorship (one-on-one program) with a Published Author.
If
you can possibly afford it, find a well-known published writer who is willing to
work with you and take a one-on-one class with that person. It can run you from
$500 or more for a three- to six-month program. But I found it was well worth
my time and money. I took one three-month private correspondence course from a
well-know time-travel mystery and suspense writer (since that's my favorite
genre) and I did a six-month mentorship program, followed by another three-month
program, with a different well-known mystery and horror writer. Both writers
are also experienced writing teachers at local colleges. These programs gave me
set goals (assignments), wonderful feed-back, hand-holding, and I was able to
sell all the novels I wrote during those periods. If you decide to do this, I
highly recommend that you find a writer who writes in your genre AND who is also
a teacher.
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12.
Get Your
Best Manuscript Critiqued by Published Author.
If
you can't find a published author-teacher who's willing to commit three to six
months to mentoring you, the next best thing is to have your manuscript
critiqued by a published writer. Since mentorship programs and critique
services are expensive, only do this if you're committed to getting a particular
manuscript published and you've sent it out and had it rejected various times.
Alternatively, if you can easily afford a critique and want to make sure your
manuscript is ready for submission, then go ahead and get it critiqued first.
But beware of critiquing services. Ten years ago, I spent $250 to have my first
novel critiqued by an editor who'd been down-sized from Simon & Schuster. I
thought she would do a wonderful job and tell me what I'd done wrong and how to
fix it—she was a professional children's book editor, after all! She sent me
back a one-and-a-half page, doubled-spaced letter that told me nothing but that
she was an idiot, and so was I for not checking her out first. She's still an
editor, so I'm not naming names. Not that I'd ever send her anything! I've
since discovered that the best critiques are given by published writers
who have either been or are editors or teachers or both. You are
paying to get in depth analysis of you work, what's wrong, whether it can be
fixed and how, whether it is a marketable manuscript or ever can be. This
analysis should be in the form of a written critique, and I would hope that for
your money it is single spaced and more than one page. One really good critique
can be as valuable as a whole class or a workshop.
Click
here for
information on having me critique your manuscript.
13.
Commit to Submit.
Don't squirrel away your manuscripts in a desk drawer, afraid to turn your
babies over to a publisher. And don't submit willy-nilly to any and every
publisher on the list, but DO multiple submit (or you'll be submitting
posthumously). Once you have a manuscript in shape, research which publishers
might be best for it and SEND it. If it comes back, SEND IT AGAIN—immediately.
Don't let a day go by when you don't have at least ONE manuscript on an editor's
desk. If you receive some helpful criticisms, revise accordingly and SEND
AGAIN. Getting published is not easy, but one thing is CERTAIN—a manuscript
tucked away in your desk will never get published.
For a simple, but efficient method of tracking your submissions, click
here.
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14.
Prepare to Wait.
And wait. And wait. And wait. This is probably one of the hardest things to
get used to. This is a SLOW business. But it's part of the publishing world,
so you'd better get used to it.
To
speed things up a bit, I have a tickler system. After exactly two months, I
send the editor an e-mail or a letter with an enclosed stamped postcard,
requesting a status check on my manuscript. The editor usually sends back the
postcard with an apology and lets me know how much longer it will take. I
usually receive an my rejection or acceptance the next month. If not, I send
another status letter or e-mail.
15.
Never Give Up.
This is the ONLY common denominator among those who are published. There are
countless stories of multi-published authors who have wallpapered their offices
with hundreds of rejection letters. Rejection is part of the business for
everyone. So keep writing, keep grinning, keep submitting, and keep your
rejections—you may be famous someday or you book might win an award and can
thumb your nose at the editor who rejected your manuscript.
II. FORMAT FOR SUBMITTING A
MANUSCRIPT
1.
Use 12 pt font.
2.
Always leave 1 inch borders all the way around each page.
3.
Format for First Page: Place you name, address, and phone number on the
TOP left-hand side of the first page. Place the approximate number of words on
the TOP right-hand side of the page. Center the title and your byline. Start
the first paragraph of the story about ¾ of the way down the first page (see
example at end of this packet).
4.
Following Pages: Place your last name and the title of your book at the
TOP left-hand side of each page, and the page number on the TOP right-hand side
of each page, like this:
Montes, A CIRCLE OF TIME Page 2
5.
Spell-check your manuscript before printing.
6.
Make sure each page is neat and legible. Think professional! Look
professional!
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